JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

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JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by splotch on Sun Dec 06, 2015 11:16 pm

(Striking while my enthusiasm for the board is fresh, hope there's not an issue with creating too many characters! I got inspired Laughing )

Jallan the fencing master

Appearance- Jallan has short spiky white hair, cut into a angled swoop around her face. Her face is narrow and pale, with cool blue eyes and a red puckered mouth. She has high cheekbones and a haughty look.

Jallan is tall, 5 foot 11, with a muscular, lean build. She had long, thin arms, with rounded biceps, fit shoulders, and a muscular back. She's got a narrow ribcage, flat stomach and thin hips, leading to shockingly long legs with marbled thighs, firm tear drop calves. She is very pale from spending most of her time in dueling halls.

Clothes- Jallan wears white, skin tight britches tucked into knee high boots. She has a white long sleeve blouse covered by a chest-plate to protect her front. She has black gloves to improve grip. She wears no jewelry, but has a metal headband to protect her forehead from dangerous and blinding wounds.

Jallan has large, C-cup breast. They protruded off her narrow frame shockingly, pert and round off her rather hard body. Jallan isn't proud of them though. She finds them an annoyance that interfere with her swordsmanship. So, to prevent this Jallan binds her chest down. Under her blouse she has a tight whit band to hold her breasts while she's in combat. Below she wears a wrapped, samurai style thong, which allows full rang of movement.

Weapons- Jallan has rapier hanging from her waist. She wields it with her right hand, her left carrying a buckler (a small round shield strapped to the forearm) to protect from strikes

Bio- Jallan was raised in a fencing order, bound by the codes of honor since a young age. She quickly became a master at her art, moving with speed and skill nearly beyond belief. Being a woman in an order of mostly men, she was never given the rank of master, but Jallan knows her own skill is among the finest.

Upon completing her training she left to travel the world, living by the code of honor. Unfortunately, the world is not a very honorable place. Jallan quickly found herself swindled, scammed until she was completely penniless. She voluntarily joined the Arena to make money. She didn't understand what others were afraid of: no one could get hurt in the arena. What was scary about a bloodless battle? Unfortunately, this was just Jallan being extremely naive once more. She had never been exposed to anyone against her will, and had little experience with the effects of nudity. She didn't know what kind of shame and humiliation it could bring. She would soon find out though...

Abilities-

Disarm- Jallan is master at stealing her enemy's weapons. A quick rapier strike to their hand, then she could sometimes manage catching their weapon with her off hand. If she managed this feat she'd have two weapons against a now disarmed opponent.

Flurry of blows- Rather then focusing on one strike Jallan will use her blade as a whip, unleashing a barrage of lighting fast small strikes to penetrate an enemies defenses and send them running.

Precise Strike- A perfectly directed strike, Jallan can focus and land her sword exactly where she wants it, landing a strike on the heart, the throat, or, in the case of the arena, a strap or belt

Bear down- Jallan uses her buckler in combat as well. She can use it to slam her opponent, smash them with a backhand, knock them over or push cover their face to line them up for a strike.

Stats-
Physical stats:
Strength-8
Constitution-7
Dexterity- 9
Speed- 10

Mental stats:
Wisdom-3
Intelligence-4
Perception-5
Charisma- 3

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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by IGankMid on Sun Dec 06, 2015 11:51 pm

Something tells me that creating too many characters isn't a bad thing. =p

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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by cerindclvr on Mon Dec 07, 2015 2:09 pm

It certainly is NOT a bad thing. I love this character design in particular; so many things about it speak to me, from her hair to her clothing to her concept. You don't see too many purely martial characters in battle. Furthermore, I demand to pit this character against one of mine in arena duel, hehe.

I'm not sure what rules system you two are using presently, it looks intriguing though. I'm curious for your input on how it's working/how it worked. I'm fine with just doing some 'freestyle' RP in a match or trying out said system.
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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by splotch on Mon Dec 07, 2015 4:54 pm

If you want to try out the system, roll 10 d10s, then drop the lowest two. Divide the remaining among the 8 stats I have listed. For each action you roll a d10 and add the stat that applies. Ties go to higher stat, if that is the same nothing happens. Amount of stripping depends on how much you beat their role by. For stat specific abilities or magic (if they directly enhance one stat) get +2 on your role. Most magics just role wisdom or intelligence to see if they succeed. here's an online dice roller:


Let's play using this system, it's easy and adds some element of chance. Oh, also you owe Seline a match as well!

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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by cerindclvr on Mon Dec 07, 2015 5:11 pm

Haha, as soon as Splotch is ready Seline will get her chance.

System seems nice and straightforward. Also versatile. Not sure if I understood the part about stat based stuff.

I'll think on a character -- you wanna start/GM it or shall I?
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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by splotch on Mon Dec 07, 2015 5:15 pm

Please, go ahead and start! Curious what's coming!

(oh, for the stat stuff, it's like Niabi's totems, which affect certain skills. Rather then roll to see what they did we said each one just gave a +2 to a certain stat, like the bear claws gave her +2 strength. Most magic just roll to see if the spell hits though)

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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by cerindclvr on Mon Dec 07, 2015 5:17 pm

Edit: misread your response as from Igankmid for some reason, haha.

Give me a little to put a character sheet together with this new system, if you want to use it. If you like I can set up a match after that? Or feel free to do so in the meantime.
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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by splotch on Mon Dec 07, 2015 5:20 pm

Which character are you using so I can properly title the match?

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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by cerindclvr on Mon Dec 07, 2015 5:29 pm

Hmm, I was either going to use Ashley or a new character. I haven't posted an original character her as a player in a while. Any thoughts?
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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by splotch on Mon Dec 07, 2015 5:34 pm

How about Ashley, then rig up a new character to battle Seline? Whatever you think is fine though.

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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by cerindclvr on Mon Dec 07, 2015 6:08 pm

Ashley's stats have been updated. I'll wait on you to start the match.
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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by IGankMid on Mon Dec 07, 2015 6:34 pm

HEADS UP & FYI:

We haven't been able to show it yet, but Niabi's totems are pretty much a game-breaker. Adding 20% to already good rolls is really, really good. To balance, what happens after she loses one is that she gets the bonus SUBTRACTED from her stat. So don't go breaking the game, heh.

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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by splotch on Mon Dec 07, 2015 6:43 pm

I feel like it's fair, without her totems Seline's magic would be an unfair advantage.

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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by splotch on Fri Jan 15, 2016 6:43 pm

I was thinking Jallan would look like amazing model Marie-Claude Boubonnais, but with a slightly decreased chest.

http://lavitrina.co/images/marie-claude-bourbonnais/marie-claude-bourbonnais-ae-hclo-af-sized-6512bd43d9caa6e02c990b0a82652dca-big-11.jpg

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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by Myds6 on Sat Jan 16, 2016 1:09 am

I may be able to work with that.
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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by Myds6 on Sat Jan 16, 2016 4:40 am

((This is what I have so far. I remembered the black gloves, and she now has them, but not in the pics I already made. The pants look just like fencing pants, which I had, but oddly didn't use...I took some "pirate" pants and used a canvas-y pattern for them, to make them look protective. Since she has the plate and you used the word "blouse," her top is more elegant and less protective. I did my best job using Marie-Claude as inspiration, but oddly enough, google image search doesn't have very good images of her face.))





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Re: JALLAN THE FENCING MASTER

Post by splotch on Sun Jan 17, 2016 3:01 am

she looks bad-ass, thanks for doing these!

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